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Did you ever wonder what made me love you?
Do you even care?
Well if you do it was your laughter,
Your smile,
Your happiness.

They say opposites attract.
They did for me.
Did they for you?
Did you notice me?
With my silent voice,
My unshowing emotions,
My ability to almost disappear.

Was it the same for you as for me?
I guess no,
You never noticed me,
Not till the very end,
The end where I told you,
And you went.

You never answered,
You just went.

I guess it wasn't your fault,
Your parents moved,
You had to go,
And I left you no address to reply.

Did you even read it?
The letter,
Where I opened up,
For the first time,
About my love for you,
And how it was love at first sight.

I hope you did.
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Love at First Sightby blissfull-emo

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / General / Free Verse©2013-2014 blissfull-emo
have a very bad love poem. The last of the song title inspirations I have written so far. I still have a few more to write. What do you think?
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amaazing!
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blissfull-emo Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :) :hug:
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BittersweetWanderer Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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justfate Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013
Can. My band use this a song mate I'll give you credit
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blissfull-emo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student General Artist
wow! really? Sure!
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EmeraldComet Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's amazing! It's so sweet and beautiful ^^ I love love poems and this one's amazing :D
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blissfull-emo Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you :)
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